developing a style..

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Ray
Feb 23, 2005
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i’m pretty new to this graphic imagery business, also to PS and other manipulators. I see so much badly executed and brilliantly executed stuff about. however i have finally produced something (it’s taken 2 weeks from knowing nothing) and i am slowly finding my way….

so what do ppl think of this pls?

http://M74.vze.com
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Mike Russell
Feb 26, 2005
Ray wrote:
i’m pretty new to this graphic imagery business, also to PS and other manipulators. I see so much badly executed and brilliantly executed stuff about. however i have finally produced something (it’s taken 2 weeks from knowing nothing) and i am slowly finding my way….
so what do ppl think of this pls?

http://M74.vze.com
ray.

Visually interesting with good composition and use of color. The red marks add some accent, but in the end are a distraction – I would add more, say to the whole bottom left corner, or figure out another way to add color.

There’s the question of how you see the actual use of the image – for a magazine you would want a more or less clear area or unsaturated area where a title or text could be overlaid, so you might want to expand the image a bit to add more space.
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Mike Russell
www.curvemeister.com
www.geigy.2y.net

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