"Olivier Bazin" wrote in message
Hello,
I would like to show you my personnal website. All advices and suggestions are welcome.
http://www.olivierbazin.com
Very nicely done. Many of us, myself included, would be proud of such an artistic effort.
The initial image is intriguing, and you ‘ve done an excellent job of making the images speak for themselves, without the need for language. Most of the images are interesting and well placed with relation to one another. I found the second and third groups to be especially well grouped and each image presents itself well.
With the first group, absence, the images have too much detail for the relatively small size of the web page image. I would make that set of image larger, or crop the images to make them more effective in a smaller format. The last image, of blurred Asian figures, was inconsistent with the overall theme of space and emptiness.
Most people are reluctant to send an email, so do not be disappointed if you receive few responses. Ask people to email you, instead of just having the @ sign available to click on. If possible, add a comments section, where people can type one or two lines of comment, and counters for each image so that you know how many people are looking.
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Mike Russell
www.curvemeister.com
