On Fri, 28 Mar 2008 13:00:12 -0400, "KatWoman" wrote:
"Dave" wrote in message
Can I have some critique on the long exposures at
http://dave.photos.gb.net/c1482780.html
please.
The daylight photos is (obviously) only added
to show what it looks like when the sun is shining.
Dave
I like the first two shots best
the pink blue orange sky is my favorite, is that enhanced? or it just looks that lovely by God’s hand?
Thanks for expressing your opinion, KatWoman (and I add value to what you say:-).
This is not enhanced, except for the usual curves and sharpening. Downright part of the Great Painter’s Creation.
My wife called me to the window to shoot this.
All of this photos were shot from my lounge.
and the same angle in the dark
I like the starry effect on the lights
the silvery light in the foreground on the building is nice contrast to the golden part of the image but not sure if they distract from each other, your eye doesn’t know where to look in the image.
I do really like the colors of light.
You are not the first person to say this (about the foreground building). A friend, the owner of Photo World where I have my photos printed, and bought my last (this) camera, said I should have had the foreground building on a photo of it’s own. I considered it, but somehow I find it fitting. Maybe I should shoot a photo with that building as the main subject.
do not like the last two shots composition or light color in the bottom left corner
The green plants thus. You think I should cut/crop/clone it out. I noticed that corner as well, and is was as if the colors we blurred.
the moon shape is distorted and position in not great
Reason for the moon shape being distorted is clouds. That is why it is not white in color. The former night the sky was clear, and I sat behind a PC, not appreciating the view:-). The next evening, the camera was fixed on a tripod with a shutter release, and the clouds started forming… this is how it is:-)
Fat Sam does really nice after dark photos
have you seen his images?
he is the person I would seek input from.