I need your critics!

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Hecate
Oct 14, 2003
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On Tue, 14 Oct 2003 00:04:25 -0300, "Jules Edouard Moustic" wrote:

Hi guys,

I just created a beta version of a website. I would appreciate if you could criticize my work, please *do* tell tell me what you don’t like. I need to know. Suggestions and comments are welcome.
Screenshot is available here:
http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg
Thanks,
Looks fine but I do hope you’re just using Photoshop as a means of prototyping your "home" page and aren’t thinking of designing a whole site using PS. That would be an extremely big mistake.

PS Ignore those people who call it "girly" typical male geek crap. Girlies need web hosts as well 😉

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G_F
Oct 17, 2003
Although I appreciate the work you’ve done, If find it too soft for my taste

a moins que ce soit un site pour enfant?
salut moustic
G
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Stephan
Oct 17, 2003
"Hecate" wrote in message
On Tue, 14 Oct 2003 00:04:25 -0300, "Jules Edouard Moustic" wrote:

PS Ignore those people who call it "girly" typical male geek crap. Girlies need web hosts as well 😉
No they don’t!
How is the beer going to get from the fridge to the couch table if girls need web hosts?
And who is going to do the dishes? uh?

Stephan
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NZane
Oct 17, 2003
Jules Edouard Moustic wrote:

Hi guys,

I just created a beta version of a website. I would appreciate if you could criticize my work, please *do* tell tell me what you don’t like. I need to know. Suggestions and comments are welcome.
Screenshot is available here:
http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg
Thanks,

Didn’t get a web site, just a jpg file:

http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg

Looking good!
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Hecate
Oct 17, 2003
On Fri, 17 Oct 2003 08:48:54 GMT, "Stephan"
wrote:

"Hecate" wrote in message
On Tue, 14 Oct 2003 00:04:25 -0300, "Jules Edouard Moustic" wrote:

PS Ignore those people who call it "girly" typical male geek crap. Girlies need web hosts as well 😉
No they don’t!
How is the beer going to get from the fridge to the couch table if girls need web hosts?
And who is going to do the dishes? uh?
The m,en will just have to get off their lard asses and do it 😉

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Quinn Keleq
Oct 17, 2003
I have to agree with some other comments. What I noticed is that many of your images are not sharp i.e. slightly out of focus. Is this on purpose…? I think this would work for certain objects, but after looking at multiple images, I started to feel like I needed a pair of glasses – uncomfortable, and lost interest. I like how you took a detail of the photographs for
t.nails, but could not always appreciate the particular detail you chose or
why.

Quinn

"Jules Edouard Moustic" wrote in message
Hi guys,

I just created a beta version of a website. I would appreciate if you
could
criticize my work, please *do* tell tell me what you don’t like. I need to know. Suggestions and comments are welcome.
Screenshot is available here:
http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg
Thanks,

J.

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Stephan
Oct 18, 2003
"Hecate" wrote in message
On Fri, 17 Oct 2003 08:48:54 GMT, "Stephan"
wrote:

"Hecate" wrote in message
On Tue, 14 Oct 2003 00:04:25 -0300, "Jules Edouard Moustic" wrote:

PS Ignore those people who call it "girly" typical male geek crap. Girlies need web hosts as well 😉
No they don’t!
How is the beer going to get from the fridge to the couch table if girls need web hosts?
And who is going to do the dishes? uh?
The m,en will just have to get off their lard asses and do it 😉

Sounds like the end of the civilized world to me 😉

Stephan
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Stephan
Oct 18, 2003
"Quinn Keleq" wrote in message
I have to agree with some other comments. What I noticed is that many of your images are not sharp i.e. slightly out of focus. Is this on
purpose…?
I think this would work for certain objects, but after looking at multiple images, I started to feel like I needed a pair of glasses – uncomfortable, and lost interest. I like how you took a detail of the photographs for
t.nails, but could not always appreciate the particular detail you chose
or
why.

Quinn

"Jules Edouard Moustic" wrote in message
Hi guys,

I just created a beta version of a website. I would appreciate if you
could
criticize my work, please *do* tell tell me what you don’t like. I need
to
know. Suggestions and comments are welcome.
Screenshot is available here:
http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg
Thanks,

Is a JPEG

Stephan
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Paul Furman
Oct 19, 2003
Hecate wrote:
Girlies need web hosts as well 😉

That’s fine if it’s the intent.

: – )

Sorry for the uncharacteristically macho comment <g>.
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Hecate
Oct 20, 2003
On Sat, 18 Oct 2003 18:19:01 -0700, Paul Furman
wrote:

Hecate wrote:
Girlies need web hosts as well 😉

That’s fine if it’s the intent.

: – )

Sorry for the uncharacteristically macho comment <g>.

LOL! No problem. I’m not easily offended – I thought was quite funny 😉

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no_email
Oct 30, 2003
On a high res it is ok, but around 1280×1024 on 19" the words become barely legible. Is this just a screen capture? If so where is the site itself?

On Fri, 17 Oct 2003 08:58:46 +0200, "G_F" <ferini(remove)@bluewin.ch> wrote:

Although I appreciate the work you’ve done, If find it too soft for my taste
a moins que ce soit un site pour enfant?
salut moustic
G
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patawalonga
Oct 31, 2003
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http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg

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